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PSAT 1.19 Writing Diagnostic. To make this paragraph most logical, sentence 3 should be placed...where?

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Thank you We sneak and here's your smoked You sure

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brought to you by descending sheep Either a surefire sign

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you're about to fall asleep or else a sign that

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you've picked a really bad fence toe fall asleep next

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to alright check a passage We've read good civilian times

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already so we're just going to skip limit on this

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game a little bit more and i don't know All

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right We're done scheming to make this paragraph most logical

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sentenced three should be placed where and here the potential

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answers right We'll tell you where you can put sentence

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three all right that was uncalled for Let's be civil

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about this people So we've got a sense indicated by

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the three in brackets and this question wants to know

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where it makes the most sense So let's put on

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our lodger cat it's right over there next to the

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pink and white sombrero reward last including my own and

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see if we can sort things out There we go

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it'll help to re read the entire paragraph in the

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questions So let's do that and it's a long one

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so we'll just let you scam for sex So here

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It is any president ever four americans on tomorrow panel

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forever calling dr german army held your ground and take

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your place all right groovy today says that we can

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leave sentence three alone but can only while the sentence

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starts with the word Moreover which tends to come on

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the heels of a related subject and generally add something

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on top of whatever came directly before it Like his

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genes which had not been washed in a month We're

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beginning to stink mightily or over a family of raccoons

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Islands have begun to gather in his bedroom window With

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that in mind to send three makes sense where it

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is no not really it doesn't fit right after sense

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to where it was just mentioned that contemporary native americans

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consider these places shrines then sentence three comes in and

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says moreover many flannels represent a sacred space to some

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tribes Awkward thence to is more a clarification or elaboration

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of sentence three than the other way around Bob can

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rock on out of here What about before sentence one

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this'd throw things totally out of whack The moreover has

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to be in response to the idea that it's heartbreaking

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That these priceless gems are being destroyed because it has

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to be more over something so no we're not going

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to take the bait here Does he have it right

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Should it be moved to the very end of paragraph

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No it might work to lead into the docks quote

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but putting it afterward is redundant competitive saying the same

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thing again and again All right While redundancy might be

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great one studying flash cards in the middle of a

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piece of writing and not so much all right these

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out the correct answer is c It should be moved

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before sends to that way It adds to the idea

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that the desecration of rock art is heartbreaking not only

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because we're losing precious works of art with a ton

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of historical value but also because they hold the religious

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significance of some native american tribes now that's the way

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they use Moreover all right it's back to counting sheep

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for us Whoever came up with that technique well it 00:03:08.048 --> [endTime] was sheer genius

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