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Sorry Then here's your shmoop du jour brought to you

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by brush strokes You know like when a paintbrush goes

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for a swim restaurant fresh that ryan locked we've got

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all right Check the following passage All right lisa's artie

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german of the reputation line class painting and were skimming

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quickly Here we've seen that's a kazillion rocco on a

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style launch grid pattern from something relevant All right here

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we go What changes need to be made descends eleven

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and hear the potential answers All right So let's take

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another look at sense Eleven jackson pollock's paint spattered canvas

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is didn't really have a subject while rothko's subjects were

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simple Squares are cool let's roll like that option a

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doesn't have it figured out He leases right to use

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an apostrophe s this makes pollock possessive which is what's

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called for here He's the one who owns the paint

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spattered canvas is right On the other hand adding an

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s by itself makes public plural As far as we

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know there was only one jackson pollock and not a

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herd of polyp clones Although that become cool Well option

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b is no good either Lisa's right to connect paint

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and spattered with a hyphen Their powers combined These two

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words become a single adjective that describes pollock's paintings Take

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my life in a way and we suddenly have a

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sentence with an extra noun and verb that throw everything

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well out of whack Of course in the world of

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pollen gotta whack Maybe a relative term but that's separate

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story We'll have to say no to choice Cia's Well

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the com attacks on the clause about rothko's work without

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it The claws like tio Fall off They're like a

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cliff Well maybe not but the sentence would be harder

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to understand So hey looks like at least got this

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one right The correct answer is deep The original sentences

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just fine as it is congrats released This calls for

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a cell is shmoop shin shmoop You know we're gone 00:02:05.15 --> [endTime] like when a paintbrush goes for a swim

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