| Quote #1 THE POOL PLAYERS. |
The pool players are presented like dramatic characters in a one-act play set in "The Golden Shovel." Why doesn't Brooks call them "Seven Pool Players"? We learn something about the way the boys talk from these lines.
| Quote #2 We real cool. We (line 1) |
Are they? Brooks said she wanted to get inside the boys' heads, so maybe these thoughts aren't meant to be public ones. It's like when you see some well-dressed person sashaying down the street and you know they're thinking "Man, I look good today." The words "real cool" are surrounded by "We" like bookends. The speaker has got "coolness" cornered – literally, on the page. If "real cool" were a car, it would be trapped in its parking spot.
| Quote #3 Lurk late. We |
In this line, the boys start to sound rebellious and maybe even dangerous. We don't know a lot of friendly things that "lurk." These lines remind us of our cat going after its toy mouse: first it "lurks" behind the couch, then it "strikes" with amazing speed. Brooks repeats the harsh "k" sound twice, which suggests coldness and hard edges.