SAT Writing and Language Drill 3.11 Effective Language Use

performance increasing its cooling cost by a lot All right

people Well the essay isn't conversational One might even say

it's ah a bit dry work which morning yeah of

the choices listed the driest or most formal way to

say ah lot is significantly as is the senses grammatically

correct but the tone is suddenly ah lot or should

we say significantly more conversational that's why a doesn't work

you like comes out informally out of nowhere like your

debutante ball and you smack someone on the back and

tell a dirty joke right You don't do that well

the word significantly gets the tone back on track but

then supersizing brings the sentence right back to a conversational

level that makes ah lot sound sophisticated Get rid of

that like super sizing totally is the wrong tone plus

totally can also mean completely which confuses the meaning of

the whole sense How do you completely increase something it's

like super unique We like totally don't know you know

all right Finally we're done We'll see you in the 00:01:18.422 --> [endTime] next section we hope if you're away lo way