Texas EOC English 1: 1.8 Editing

named cuba's blah blah blah And one more block to

cover the last paragraph block Then we're done All right

What change needs to be made to sentence hen and

here the potential answers Russians really coming All right let's

take a quick peek at sentence Ten expressionist painters like

pollock and rothko are also well known for their very

abstract paintings Well we'll get this going Bye Nixing answer

D no doubt about it Uh this sense needs a

change All right Well that's that option a isn't the

change needed Police uses the right term when she describes

the painters as expressionist If she called them expressionistic it

would mean that the painters themselves were just a zab

strack informa's Their paintings work though jackson pollock would be

a flock of splatters And rocco would be nothing but

a solid block of color Next we'll move on to

choice b to which we say what there's Not any

reason A sane human being would put a comma after

pollock the same cat maybe but they don't have great

grammar skills All right well this brings us to option

c The correct answer The only way to cure this

sense of its grammatical issues is to cut the comma

after rothko Sorry rothko Hope you weren't attached to that 00:01:42.106 --> [endTime] Common will only hurt for a moment