Texas EOC English 1: 1.8 Editing
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named cuba's blah blah blah And one more block to
cover the last paragraph block Then we're done All right
What change needs to be made to sentence hen and
here the potential answers Russians really coming All right let's
take a quick peek at sentence Ten expressionist painters like
pollock and rothko are also well known for their very
abstract paintings Well we'll get this going Bye Nixing answer
D no doubt about it Uh this sense needs a
change All right Well that's that option a isn't the
change needed Police uses the right term when she describes
the painters as expressionist If she called them expressionistic it
would mean that the painters themselves were just a zab
strack informa's Their paintings work though jackson pollock would be
a flock of splatters And rocco would be nothing but
a solid block of color Next we'll move on to
choice b to which we say what there's Not any
reason A sane human being would put a comma after
pollock the same cat maybe but they don't have great
grammar skills All right well this brings us to option
c The correct answer The only way to cure this
sense of its grammatical issues is to cut the comma
after rothko Sorry rothko Hope you weren't attached to that 00:01:42.106 --> [endTime] Common will only hurt for a moment