Texas EOC English 1: 1.8 Editing

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named cuba's blah blah blah And one more block to

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cover the last paragraph block Then we're done All right

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What change needs to be made to sentence hen and

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here the potential answers Russians really coming All right let's

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take a quick peek at sentence Ten expressionist painters like

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pollock and rothko are also well known for their very

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abstract paintings Well we'll get this going Bye Nixing answer

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D no doubt about it Uh this sense needs a

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change All right Well that's that option a isn't the

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change needed Police uses the right term when she describes

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the painters as expressionist If she called them expressionistic it

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would mean that the painters themselves were just a zab

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strack informa's Their paintings work though jackson pollock would be

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a flock of splatters And rocco would be nothing but

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a solid block of color Next we'll move on to

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choice b to which we say what there's Not any

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reason A sane human being would put a comma after

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pollock the same cat maybe but they don't have great

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grammar skills All right well this brings us to option

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c The correct answer The only way to cure this

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sense of its grammatical issues is to cut the comma

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after rothko Sorry rothko Hope you weren't attached to that 00:01:42.106 --> [endTime] Common will only hurt for a moment