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- 00:00
Thank you We sneak in Sorry And here's your smoke
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too Sure brought to you by expressionism Don't let the
- 00:12
name fool you it's Not any faster than other types
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of art All right Checking the following passage police and
- 00:18
her paper on art art who you ask No knight
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- 00:23
named cuba's blah blah blah And one more block to
- 00:29
cover the last paragraph block Then we're done All right
- 00:33
What change needs to be made to sentence hen and
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here the potential answers Russians really coming All right let's
- 00:42
take a quick peek at sentence Ten expressionist painters like
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pollock and rothko are also well known for their very
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abstract paintings Well we'll get this going Bye Nixing answer
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D no doubt about it Uh this sense needs a
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change All right Well that's that option a isn't the
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change needed Police uses the right term when she describes
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the painters as expressionist If she called them expressionistic it
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would mean that the painters themselves were just a zab
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strack informa's Their paintings work though jackson pollock would be
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a flock of splatters And rocco would be nothing but
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a solid block of color Next we'll move on to
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choice b to which we say what there's Not any
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reason A sane human being would put a comma after
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pollock the same cat maybe but they don't have great
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grammar skills All right well this brings us to option
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c The correct answer The only way to cure this
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sense of its grammatical issues is to cut the comma
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after rothko Sorry rothko Hope you weren't attached to that 00:01:42.106 --> [endTime] Common will only hurt for a moment