ACT Aspire English: Identifying Correct Punctuation

long gone We fix that before struggling to maintain their

existence Record stores can't compete with digital streaming services Yeah

we fix that one too Thank you People nowadays no

longer need to store their music They can listen to

whatever they choose as long as they have access to

the internet while few you cd or vinyl records storage

cases anymore There's something rotten in denmark here in denmark

being a paragraph three There's the comma effectively separates the

two clauses of the sentence The sentence is correct as

is who actually not run not rotten at all It

works And yes we love it When that happens they

were just pushing on you Semicolons and periods separate thoughts

that can each stand alone you know on their own

But the second part of this particular sense begins with

while which is a dependent clause and definitely can't stand

on its own unless it has a hefty pair of

training wheels like it either Yeah finally joining the two

parts of the sentence with a comma and without any

connector word creates a comma slice and a grammatical error

And sometimes when you take these questions you should actually

go through the wrong ones even if it looks okay

to you and that there's no change stick in these

others like they'll just sound bad like the idea that

people nowadays bubble whatever they choose as long as they

have access to music While few years alright we'll access

the music give access music through the internet right That's

the big failing on this one It's should be internet

not music and note that in each of these they

just have music there So that's all wrong Answer is

a no change Everyone could just go chill and listen 00:02:00.061 --> [endTime] to some led zep Yeah