ACT Aspire English: Revising the Order of Sentences

In some ways the internet has empowered artists allowing them

to have more control over their careers are sent to

However the internet has made it possible for many more

people to record and promote their music so artists may

struggle to distinguish themselves from the growing competition Alright then

since three Instead of depending on record companies to record

release and promote their music artist can record their own

music release songs online and promote themselves via social media

and earn the dollar ninety eight a week that they

now earn and then sense floor In this regard artists

have benefited from a revolution in technology that has forever

changed music industry All right no one's mentioning that big

album today only gets three million sales and a big

album in nineteen eighty got like forty million and nobody

is making any money in the music biz So there

not much innovation but way wind We die grass here

So let's think about this What's the right order here

Well paragraph four discusses the ways in which artists have

benefited from changes in the music industry and also mentions

that it may be harder for artists to distinguish themselves

right so it looks like we're dealing with both pros

and cons Here's what makes the most sense to group

the benefits together before mentioning the challenges It's also our

preferred method to deliver bad news Well since one is

a good introductory sense because it introduces a general idea

of a possible benefit for artists But following sense one

with sentenced for there would be redundant repetitive kind of

saying the same thing again and again and again because

they're both speaking generally about the advantages rather than about

the specifics right then sentenced to goes into the disadvantages

so it doesn't and followed logically and well So just

gives us that the most logical order would be one

than three then four Then too the last sentence of

the whole shmoop gigi paragraph here would be However the

internet has made it possible for many more people to

record promote their music So artist makes roland distinguish themselves

blah blah blah That's the end of it So the

answer is d one three four two and yes we're 00:02:23.83 --> [endTime] shmoop