SAT Writing and Language Drill 2.4 Effective Language Use

to be carried a comma which only occupied so well

what do we do here What The tone of the

passage isn't overly formal but it's not informally there it's

kind of down the middle the fairway there The passage

emphasizes the grandeur of the occasion which is best highlighted

by describing the carriage as stately both big and enormous

are well too vague and info formal to fit in

with the rest of the stone Be hard for the

carriage to be crowded since washington was the only one

in it wasn't that big dude right so in this

passage of the upgrade would be thus stately carriage right

and that's kind of a thing in these essays Notice

how they first had the word vig in there and

they're asking you to upgrade with the more five dollar

words stately So when in doubt most the time you're

going to want to upgrade to the fancy word instead

of the overly simplistic just big because they're kind of

testing you on your vocab among other things here so 00:01:09.756 --> [endTime] that's it it's stately not just big