SAT Writing and Language Drill 3.4 Effective Language Use
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think this was going to thousands of people in our
peace resulting from for example a lot of people around
one three seven point four million tons of approximately the
annual us potato field each year Okay well here we
go What we think and we need to change anything
here Yeah proctor yeah Probably should cause approximately the and
you will Us potato yield just sounds awkward doesn't infringe
the word's kind of flip around there So generally if
you khun say a straightforward fact with fewer words say
the straight for in fact with fewer words Yeah i
bet you wish we learned that better hear from up
when we ran along here we only need to convey
annual once right self approximately the annual us potato yield
each year that really hits it off Who knows that
annual thing there Yeah the word annual means each year
in fact and saying a word to ways doesn't add
any clarity or nuance and sentence So yeah we're going
to change a yearly annually also mean each year give
it a beansie but neither of these options solves the
issue of redundancy Repeating things saying the same thing over
and over and over and over again and again Sorry