SAT Writing and Language Drill 3.4 Effective Language Use

think this was going to thousands of people in our

peace resulting from for example a lot of people around

one three seven point four million tons of approximately the

annual us potato field each year Okay well here we

go What we think and we need to change anything

here Yeah proctor yeah Probably should cause approximately the and

you will Us potato yield just sounds awkward doesn't infringe

the word's kind of flip around there So generally if

you khun say a straightforward fact with fewer words say

the straight for in fact with fewer words Yeah i

bet you wish we learned that better hear from up

when we ran along here we only need to convey

annual once right self approximately the annual us potato yield

each year that really hits it off Who knows that

annual thing there Yeah the word annual means each year

in fact and saying a word to ways doesn't add

any clarity or nuance and sentence So yeah we're going

to change a yearly annually also mean each year give

it a beansie but neither of these options solves the

issue of redundancy Repeating things saying the same thing over

and over and over and over again and again Sorry