SAT Writing and Language Drill 3.8 Effective Language Use

do something cool to lower minimum damages in the amount

of power generated is directly related to the cooling process

More our community for local system leading to higher reading

for the plane Okay Well what do you think here

Oh red Pretty good to me All right Well the

most direct way to say directly related teo is how

do you say that directly related to we don't need

to add any extra words Some fancy to be or

not to bees or complex structures Since the original is

already perfectly concise Watch out for verb forms on this

one as well since the subject amount of power is

singular Since the passage is set in the present the

verb form must also be singular and present as it

is you know that's one of the curveballs They eva

leigh liked to throw out your head on these tests

All right and then just going through the rest just

to be thorough here the amount of power may sometimes

be expressed in a number like five volts or one

point two gigawatts But here it's just a general amount

a singular noun that doesn't agree with plural verbs such

as are and have to give it to those having

a direct relationship in terms of their you go d

cooling temperature may sound sophisticated but it doesn't explain to

what exactly the amount of power generated is related So

that's it Don't change a thing Don't mess with perfection

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