SAT Writing and Language Drill 3.8 Effective Language Use
Can 'is directly to' be simplified? Watch this SAT Writing video to find out!
| Effective Language Use | Precision |
| Expression of Ideas | Effective Language Use |
| Product Type | SAT Writing |
| SAT | SAT Writing and Language |
| SAT Writing | Expression of Ideas |
| Test Prep | SAT Writing |
Transcript
do something cool to lower minimum damages in the amount
of power generated is directly related to the cooling process
More our community for local system leading to higher reading
for the plane Okay Well what do you think here
Oh red Pretty good to me All right Well the
most direct way to say directly related teo is how
do you say that directly related to we don't need
to add any extra words Some fancy to be or
not to bees or complex structures Since the original is
already perfectly concise Watch out for verb forms on this
one as well since the subject amount of power is
singular Since the passage is set in the present the
verb form must also be singular and present as it
is you know that's one of the curveballs They eva
leigh liked to throw out your head on these tests
All right and then just going through the rest just
to be thorough here the amount of power may sometimes
be expressed in a number like five volts or one
point two gigawatts But here it's just a general amount
a singular noun that doesn't agree with plural verbs such
as are and have to give it to those having
a direct relationship in terms of their you go d
cooling temperature may sound sophisticated but it doesn't explain to
what exactly the amount of power generated is related So
that's it Don't change a thing Don't mess with perfection
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