SAT Writing and Language Drill 4.10 Development
This SAT Reading video goes over when (or when not) to add a sentence.
| Development | Focus |
| Expression of Ideas | Development |
| Product Type | SAT Writing |
| SAT | SAT Writing and Language |
| SAT Writing | Expression of Ideas |
| Test Prep | SAT Writing |
Transcript
added or not it's not really add much to it
it's kind of like more granular detail about the care
and feeding of a painting that worthy of this fine
piece of writing well to end the paragraph about paintings
whereabouts in the eighteen hundreds with information about how the
painting was preserved into the nineteenth and twentieth centuries maybe
interesting Teo somebody get a different hobby but it deviates
too far from the topic here Yeah stay relevant sends
while it's true that sends follows the forward moving chronology
of the paragraph There needs to be a good reason
for adding information that goes beyond the timeline of our
passage So get rid of a likewise Though the sentence
does indeed jumped too far ahead in the chronology of
events unexplained time travel is not its main problem here
The very first sentence of the essay tells us that
the painting still exist since it says the painting is
in the capitol's rotunda Real issue here is relevance not 00:01:06.116 --> [endTime] time Sort of like politics