SAT Writing and Language Drill 5.2 Organization

needs of changing population grows and changes It becomes popular

with robots and sandy's planners helping these manage that related

economic social and environmental issues What phrases like for instance

introduce a specific example of something that was just discussed

Usually in the previous sentence for instance is not only

a useful phrase but it's a flexible one too because

it really can go anywhere in the sentence you know

kind of like the cheese it stands alone Put it

after the first comma for instance and the sentences meaning

stays the same So that's our baby d there for

instance go the loser pile here If you put as

an example a after that same comma well then the

sentence might mean that the planners are examining plans as

if those plans were an example wherever it is in

the sentence as an example isn't as concise as for

example however an example by itself is an incomplete claws

like be so rid of that What about the example

Well given that maybe grammatically correct but it suggests a

sequence of events like what was given here Where were

we told about the things that go on in same

city There are urban planners who developed these planes and

because of that while they examine plans for proposed facilities

that's not quite the right relationship between sentences so that's 00:01:29.771 --> [endTime] it you know for instance