SAT Writing and Language Drill 8.4 Development
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Another SAT Writing video on whether a sentence sound be added to improve this passage on The Treasury's Beginnings.
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Expression of Ideas | Development |
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so let's see this is the end of paragraph one
so it would go right here after a yeti at
a congress issued two million dollars in bills on july
twenty fifth congress hired twenty eight said this is the
philadelphia to sign and number of the currency where they'd
be a busy hand running all that So then the
next sentence would be the congress stipulated that each of
the colony's contribute proportionally So should they add that that's
kind of weird like where the colonies come from You
don't know Well because it raises so many questions Putting
this sentence at the end of the first paragraph would
end in kind of a jolt there What are the
colony's contributing Just like a stone soup or something Is
the proportion in terms of population size the golf handicap
Maybe the essay never says leaving this sentence sticking out
like a sore thumb So yeah it's got to be
a no because just nowhere else mentioned that comes out
of nowhere all right and lose around Just because this
sense is vague does not mean it contradicts the main
point of the first paragraph which is about the early
days of money management in the colonies Likewise just because
the sentence doesn't contradict the main point doesn't mean that
ad's relevant information See goodbye infact it leaves us feeling
like we have even less information since it raises new
questions left unanswered Will the paragraphs are linked by criminology
So adding information about colonies without any date makes the
transition rougher not smother So yeah get rid of the
right answers eh In the colonies Sorry just keeping it 00:01:45.539 --> [endTime] real You're not invited to this party