SAT Writing and Language Drill 8.4 Development

so let's see this is the end of paragraph one

so it would go right here after a yeti at

a congress issued two million dollars in bills on july

twenty fifth congress hired twenty eight said this is the

philadelphia to sign and number of the currency where they'd

be a busy hand running all that So then the

next sentence would be the congress stipulated that each of

the colony's contribute proportionally So should they add that that's

kind of weird like where the colonies come from You

don't know Well because it raises so many questions Putting

this sentence at the end of the first paragraph would

end in kind of a jolt there What are the

colony's contributing Just like a stone soup or something Is

the proportion in terms of population size the golf handicap

Maybe the essay never says leaving this sentence sticking out

like a sore thumb So yeah it's got to be

a no because just nowhere else mentioned that comes out

of nowhere all right and lose around Just because this

sense is vague does not mean it contradicts the main

point of the first paragraph which is about the early

days of money management in the colonies Likewise just because

the sentence doesn't contradict the main point doesn't mean that

ad's relevant information See goodbye infact it leaves us feeling

like we have even less information since it raises new

questions left unanswered Will the paragraphs are linked by criminology

So adding information about colonies without any date makes the

transition rougher not smother So yeah get rid of the

right answers eh In the colonies Sorry just keeping it 00:01:45.539 --> [endTime] real You're not invited to this party