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Revising a Letter by Adding Transitions
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Which is the best way to revise and combine sentences 1 and 2?

TSI Writing: Adding a New Sentence to Improve a Letter's Structure
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Where would the following sentence best be placed?

TSI Writing: Choosing the Best Introductory Transition
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Which of the following is best to insert at the beginning of sentence 8?

TSI Writing: Adding Strong Supporting Details
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Which of the following details would best support the author's purpose if inserted after sentence 9 in the passage?

TSI Writing: Omitting Sentences to Improve Clarity
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Which sentence in paragraph two should be omitted for clarity?

TSI Writing: Which Word Best Replaces "Computers" in this Sentence?
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Which word or phrase best replaces the underlined word in sentence 14?

TSI Writing: Identifying the Strongest Transition Between Two Sentences
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Which of the following revisions best combines sentences 12 and 13?

TSI Writing: Starting a Sentence with the Best Transition
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Which word or phrase provides the best transition for the beginning of sentence 18?

TSI Writing: Which Sentence Would Provide the Best Support for the Author's Thesis?
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Which of the following could provide additional support for the thesis of the passage if inserted after sentence 1?

TSI Writing: Recogizing Credible Sources
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Which of the following phrases could be considered a credible source if added to the beginning of sentence 4?

TSI Writing: Removing Extraneous Information
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Which sentence should be removed from paragraph three because it provides extraneous information?

TSI Writing: Improving Word Choice
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Which is the best way to revise sentence 12?