Texas EOC English 1: 2.6 Revision

public official law making runs public Marjorie really All right

paragraph five which is sentences sixteen Eighteen here should be

moved where to make the paper more effective and hear

the potential answers way Well the best thing to do

with this kind of question is to re read the

paragraph and then mentally cut and paste it into the

place Each answer choice suggests a well fully caffeinated re

here Any civil rights activists believe that lost films were

unfair They also believe that leads treason is racially biased

The only way to reform these unfair laws so that

i can win back the voting rights act can all

right Well good thing we just had our mental cut

and paste er so let's get to it Option a

is definitely at paragraph five would make a bad opening

paragraph if it were placed at the top of the

paper it would refer to a bunch of stuff that

hasn't been explained yet which would be weird and confusing

Like our wacky uncle who tells long rambling stories thanksgiving

you want to go Option b isn't much better Honestly

it's Not better at all again paragraph five would be

weird here because it talked about things that have yet

to be set up by the paper answer C is

right on track We do need to put paragraph five

later in the paper but we're gonna have to take

more drastic measures and putting it after paragraph six Placing

it after the sixth paragraph wouldn't work so well because

the issue of the huge percentage of minorities that air

disenfranchised doesn't come up until paragraph seven So if we

hop on that train a logic we have to conclude

that choice dee is the right answer Paragraph five follows

up on the ideas in paragraph seven by saying that

the justice system itself is biased against minorities which makes

the disenfranchisement of minority felons even worse And how are

we defining minorities here anyway All right well this paragraph

also works here because it's a strong conclusion since the

last line gives us a solution to the problem of

disenfranchised felons Now if only we could get dogs the

right to vote the world might be a better place 00:02:24.333 --> [endTime] She doesn't trust it