Texas EOC English 1: 1.10 Editing

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to be glory be come in teo pollock rocco All

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right well here we go What change needs to be

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made to sentence twelve And here a potential answers All

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right we've got this let's First take a look at

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this sentence Right here Twelve bonano Keith created very different

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kinds of non representational art Then the expressionists and cuba's

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Oh boy Looks like there's an issue here So let's

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go ahead and cross that choice You could tell from

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our boys there It's Okay lease We got your back

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Will also eliminate option a there's no good reason And

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put a comma after o'keefe Unless of course we want

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to get expressionistic with our punctuation and do it because

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we randomly feel like it But that kind of stuff

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typically frowned on by the sea lisa's sentence would be

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even more grammatically incorrect if she went with answer b

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he's right in using the past tense for created o'keefe

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a monet did they're painting in the past Creating is

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a progressive And if he least used it here it

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would kind of sound like o'keefe and money were still

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painting this moment But as far as we know neither

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painter found the secret to immortality Right Option c is

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the right answer Alisa's Trouble is that she used then

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instead of van Then issues is an adverb renowned When

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talking about a siri's or time like this happened that

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happened like we would say It was then that we

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knew elise needed help on her paper Then that was

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time Got it Van is used as a conjunction or

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proposition to show a comparison like this is greater than

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that since police is comparing money and o'keefe to expressionists

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and cuba's van is what's needed here Quick show idea

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Famous artists fight for survival in a hunger game style 00:02:21.26 --> [endTime] Deathmatch thoughts maybe not expressionistic with our punctuation