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the best way to rewrite sentence For and here the

potential answers A real art All caps that classical paintings

All right well release uses sarcasm when describing classical representational

art as really art missed it the first time though

Yeah we did too The trouble with the original sentences

that this sarcasm is well just not totally clear Unlike

our fine working schmuck where it hits over the head

with a hammer The main idea of this paper is

that abstract art is just a cz legit as representational

art at least things that a smear of paint on

a canvas is as good as a painting that's painstakingly

realistic this versus that If that's the case we've got

some napkins left over from lunch that we'd love for

her to take a look at for eight thousand dollars

each All right let's get started by mixing choice Hey

this not only has the same problem is the original

sense but it also makes things worse by being convoluted

and hard to understand at least would probably pull her

hair out if you saw option d This sentence says

that on li classical art is really art which is

the total opposite of what lisa's trying to say Our

author wouldn't be too happy with choice be either her

Point is that most people think that classical painting is

the only kind of art that's real But this sense

is trying to convince us otherwise Well guess what choice

see is the correct answer It keeps the meaning of

the original sentence but manages to give us the correct

kind of emphasis on the term riel art Putting the

phrase real art in quotation marks shows sarcasm allowing at

least to get across the idea that she doesn't agree

with what most people think Way should be good as

long as we don't go too crazy with quotation marks

they was their significance If we'll use too often and

here's looking at you fans of air quotes rather tears 00:02:13.558 --> [endTime] or something you know