Texas EOC English 1: 1.4 Editing
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Composition | Writing Process |
Handwriting, Capitalization, Punctuation | Capitalization |
Language | English Language |
Punctuation Marks | Question Marks for Sarcasm/Irony |
Texas EOC | Editing |
Texas EOC English I | Editing |
Transcript
the best way to rewrite sentence For and here the
potential answers A real art All caps that classical paintings
All right well release uses sarcasm when describing classical representational
art as really art missed it the first time though
Yeah we did too The trouble with the original sentences
that this sarcasm is well just not totally clear Unlike
our fine working schmuck where it hits over the head
with a hammer The main idea of this paper is
that abstract art is just a cz legit as representational
art at least things that a smear of paint on
a canvas is as good as a painting that's painstakingly
realistic this versus that If that's the case we've got
some napkins left over from lunch that we'd love for
her to take a look at for eight thousand dollars
each All right let's get started by mixing choice Hey
this not only has the same problem is the original
sense but it also makes things worse by being convoluted
and hard to understand at least would probably pull her
hair out if you saw option d This sentence says
that on li classical art is really art which is
the total opposite of what lisa's trying to say Our
author wouldn't be too happy with choice be either her
Point is that most people think that classical painting is
the only kind of art that's real But this sense
is trying to convince us otherwise Well guess what choice
see is the correct answer It keeps the meaning of
the original sentence but manages to give us the correct
kind of emphasis on the term riel art Putting the
phrase real art in quotation marks shows sarcasm allowing at
least to get across the idea that she doesn't agree
with what most people think Way should be good as
long as we don't go too crazy with quotation marks
they was their significance If we'll use too often and
here's looking at you fans of air quotes rather tears 00:02:13.558 --> [endTime] or something you know