Texas EOC English 2: 1.3 Revision

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ten in order to support her argument Mohr concisely and

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effectively Which of the following would be the most effective

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way to combine this information and hear the potential answers

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All right so we'll take another look at senses eight

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through ten let's Just read him For example we can

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choose to live closer to where we work Another example

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is that we can choose to take public transportation like

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buses and trains Whenever possible we can choose to buy

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smaller more gas efficient cars The most important thing is

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to not leave out any crucial information while sk wishing

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these sentences together If we squished too hard we'll be

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disastrous You like a nuclear bomb thing Like when all

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the cheese squirts out of a sandwich in a panini

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press or that nuclear bomb thing option a squish is

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way too hard This version makes it seem like we

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can only choose one of the actions given not all

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of them Mother earth might have something to say about

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that bee doesn't pack in all the info we need

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either way can choose all these things But the original

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sentences gave us details about how specific choices might help

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the environment Let's hope the next option's better mother earth

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is seriously getting steamed which does nothing to help global

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warming Option d is getting a little better but it

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still leaves out the main point of the original sentences

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We have to know the reason for all these choices

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and we find that reason in choice See so let's

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celebrate By reading it we can choose to live closer

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to where we work by smaller and more gas efficient

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vehicles and take public transportation whenever possible Point of doing

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all this stuff is to save gas right right This

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new version condenses everything important from the original sentences eight

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through ten and leaves out all the excess baggage condensing 00:02:02.764 --> [endTime] It makes everything better except milk Disgusting