Texas EOC English 2: 3.3 Editing

well here Potential answers All right well first we've got

to say no to choi city Did you take a

good look at this sentence The heat city had the

characteristics capitalized that my parents were looking for And i

told them that each one would be a good place

for us to live We can't in good conscience leave

it like this Also going to get rid of a

it's A bad idea for mary to change each one

to both of them Right by Well for one sense

begins by using each to refer to the city's individually

So to avoid confusion it's best to keep referring to

them in the same way Also if we replaced the

singular each one with the plural both of them we

then have to change The singular would be a good

place to the plural would be good places Option a

Doesn't give us this option though so it's a no

go take heed mary you know like that old milk

in the back of the fridge choice is best avoided

choice See also takes us into old milk territory The

original sense correctly connects our two independent clauses with a

comma and a conjunction And if we change the common

to a semicolon the conjunction and would no longer be

needed And we really want to rob a poor conjunction

of its sole purpose in life Really come on people

It's not nice The correct answer is b the problem

is that characteristics is capitalized for no good reason Like

usually we only capitalized Proper announce like mary corpus christi

kanye west Yeah well not sure how proper connie is

but you get the idea anyway In this case characteristics

is just a regular now so we need to uncap

it Elisa de capitalize er whatever you do that it's

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