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Texas EOC English 2: 4.1 Editing 169 Views


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Thank you We sneak in Sorry Then here's your shmoop

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du jour brought to you by an affordable college education

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and other endangered species And we're not getting way to

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see what your college abilities are Checking falling passage There

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we go The importance of affordable state university's Good luck

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way Hope they stay affordable bythe All right What change

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of any should be made in sentenced to and here

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the potential answers and let's give me the boot before

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we even begin Because there's got to be some change

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here Just asked bob dealing to sing about it All

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right Yeah When states apostrophe s notice that have economic

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problems One of the first things to get Cut his

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education All right well this sense has a big whopping

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problem that must be solved Our next boot goes the

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choice b because it removes a very necessary comma Enjoy

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that New footwear Be okay Let's Entertain choice See suggestion

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for a hot sex See says that when states have

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economic problems ought to be changed too When states have

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problems with economics we see a difference Not so much

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right Both versions say the same thing only sees version

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uses more words to do so This is a no

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warning a stone So there's no way that ctu can

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stay around here Also see misses the glaring mistake in

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the sentence That's fixed by option a In this sentence

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states is simply the plural of state Adding an apostrophe

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before the s makes it possessive but there's Nothing for

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a state to possess Really it's Better off people these 00:01:40.378 --> [endTime] days have way too much stuff No

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