Texas EOC English 2: 3.5 Editing
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and here the potential answer We're going to dive in
Here we go Yeah we've got lots of trouble and
sentence ten making a decision that only affects myself is
one thing Making a decision for my whole family is
something i wanted to share with my parents Oh where
to begin Well how bout with this misused comma Both
making a decision that on ly effects myself is one
thing And making a decision for my whole family is
something i wanted to share with my parents Our independent
clauses with their own subjects and verbs connecting them with
a comma turns the sentence into that dreaded grammatical error
known as the comma slice Knowing this also allows us
to quickly nick's choices d and a which make the
exact same mistake So no need to fry your brain
cells are most choice B fixes the common supply situation
by using a comma and the conjunction But however the
second half of the sentence is so garbled it's hard
to even know what is trying to say the phrase
to make a decision for my whole family and the
claws I wanted to share that with my parents Just
don't get along so choice sees correct the comma and
the but fix the calmest slice and on top of
that myself is changed too Me fixing another problem from
the original sentence Before we say good bye to marriage
paper can we just point out the gamble her parents
took and letting her decide where they'd moved when she
was a kid What if she demanded they use teo 00:01:53.218 --> [endTime] pink pony land what's that way