Texas EOC English 2: 3.5 Editing

and here the potential answer We're going to dive in

Here we go Yeah we've got lots of trouble and

sentence ten making a decision that only affects myself is

one thing Making a decision for my whole family is

something i wanted to share with my parents Oh where

to begin Well how bout with this misused comma Both

making a decision that on ly effects myself is one

thing And making a decision for my whole family is

something i wanted to share with my parents Our independent

clauses with their own subjects and verbs connecting them with

a comma turns the sentence into that dreaded grammatical error

known as the comma slice Knowing this also allows us

to quickly nick's choices d and a which make the

exact same mistake So no need to fry your brain

cells are most choice B fixes the common supply situation

by using a comma and the conjunction But however the

second half of the sentence is so garbled it's hard

to even know what is trying to say the phrase

to make a decision for my whole family and the

claws I wanted to share that with my parents Just

don't get along so choice sees correct the comma and

the but fix the calmest slice and on top of

that myself is changed too Me fixing another problem from

the original sentence Before we say good bye to marriage

paper can we just point out the gamble her parents

took and letting her decide where they'd moved when she

was a kid What if she demanded they use teo 00:01:53.218 --> [endTime] pink pony land what's that way