Texas EOC English 1: 2.3 Revision

ten to improve the papers organization and hear the potential

answers I'm here well what to do with sentences nine

and ten Let's take a look at him first Right

here A few states have extended voting rights to prisoners

However several more permanently disenfranchise felons Well the main issue

here is that a two second paragraph is generally a

bad idea It's on a total No No But we

need a good reason to do such a thing And

is there a good reason here No no there is

not Well Choiceseat is nothing to fix the problem If

anything combining the two senses it make it just worse

Having one lonely sentence isolated from the rest of the

paragraph for no good reason would make it even well

Let's sense and let's face it even for a sentence

It's sad to be alone On the other hand choice

d is a little drastic Chill out d you're overdoing

it a bit way shouldn't cut these sentences completely out

of the essays they do contain some solid information That's

pertinent to what's going on answer b doesn't work Either

simply because it's a little random sentence is nine and

ten just don't logically fit into the flow of things

this late in the paper While choice a nails it

These two senses are a continuation of the proceeding topic

So there's No reason We can't unite him with the

previous paragraph It's like returning a lost puppy but with 00:01:49.84 --> [endTime] words Just look at them together