Texas EOC English 1: 2.3 Revision
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ten to improve the papers organization and hear the potential
answers I'm here well what to do with sentences nine
and ten Let's take a look at him first Right
here A few states have extended voting rights to prisoners
However several more permanently disenfranchise felons Well the main issue
here is that a two second paragraph is generally a
bad idea It's on a total No No But we
need a good reason to do such a thing And
is there a good reason here No no there is
not Well Choiceseat is nothing to fix the problem If
anything combining the two senses it make it just worse
Having one lonely sentence isolated from the rest of the
paragraph for no good reason would make it even well
Let's sense and let's face it even for a sentence
It's sad to be alone On the other hand choice
d is a little drastic Chill out d you're overdoing
it a bit way shouldn't cut these sentences completely out
of the essays they do contain some solid information That's
pertinent to what's going on answer b doesn't work Either
simply because it's a little random sentence is nine and
ten just don't logically fit into the flow of things
this late in the paper While choice a nails it
These two senses are a continuation of the proceeding topic
So there's No reason We can't unite him with the
previous paragraph It's like returning a lost puppy but with 00:01:49.84 --> [endTime] words Just look at them together