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TSI Writing: Cloudy with a Chance of Pessimism 3 Views
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Think about how you would rewrite the following sentences according to the directions given, and then choose the best answer for each. Keep in mind that your revision should not change the meaning of the original sentence.
We won't bring an umbrella
Transcript
- 00:03
Okay sy writing editing shmoop er's Next sentence for you
- 00:07
If it rains will bring an umbrella right now we're
- 00:09
switching around we won't bring an umbrella What No i'm
- 00:14
gonna come in there Well short of filming a rock
- 00:20
video There's really No reason not to bring an umbrella
Full Transcript
- 00:23
in the rain choosing unless it rains to complete This
- 00:26
sentence conveys the idea that if it does rain while
- 00:28
as the original sentence states then we'll bring an umbrella
- 00:32
So that's it We won't bring an umbrella unless it 00:00:35.226 --> [endTime] rains That's it We're smoked and dry
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