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Excessive Verbiage

You probably wouldn’t run, bike, hike, swim, jump, play, throw, sprint, and lift all at the same time. That sounds like a whole lot of work, not to mention an injury waiting to happen. So why put your sentence through that type of effort? We’ll tell you why it’s best to keep it simple.

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