How we cite our quotes: (Chapter.Paragraph)
Quote #1
"With fairest flowers/Whilst summer last, and I live here, Fidele—" (1.1-2)
This is a quotation from Shakespeare's Cymbeline; the speaker is saying he'll put flowers on the grave of Fidele. It's a kind of eulogy, so you could see it as the narrator mourning, or eulogizing, Mariana. But Mariana isn't dead; she's just someone the narrator made up. So the quotation is also a tip off; the narrator is using a literary allusion to mourn, or memorialize, his own literary creation. (Also, it's just a fancy, flowery way to start off what's going to be a fancy, flowery story. You could see it as a warning; "if you don't like fancy and flowery, get out now.")
Quote #2
I cannot credit that the mettlesome poet, Byron, would have contentedly sat down with Bartleby to examine a law document of say five hundred pages, closely written in a crimpy hand. (2.20)
The romantic poet Byron was known for his adventurousness and unconventionality. He seems the opposite of the staid, boring Bartleby. But Bartleby won't examine law documents either. Maybe he's more Byronic than he looks.
Quote #3
Somehow of late, I had got into the way of involuntarily using this word "prefer" upon all sorts of not exactly suitable occasions. And I trembled to think that my contact with the scrivener had already and seriously affected me in a mental way. (2.116)
Bartleby is a sad sack as a writer—but on the other hand, he seems to have the gift of coining a memorable phrase. He should have been a pop song writer, maybe (though he'd probably prefer not to.)
Quote #4
Dead letters! Does it not sound like dead men? (2.251)
The dead letter office is for letters that are undeliverable. The narrator conflates that with actual dead people. This blurs the line between writing and reality—a line which gets smudgy in other places in the collection as well. Bartleby is character and writer; you could see him as writing himself, a self-penned letter that never gets delivered.
Quote #5
It was just the manner of one making up his tale for evil purposes, as he goes. (3.156)
Don Benito is the inventor of the tale here—and he is in fact telling his story for evil purposes. The actual author of that story, though, is not Don Benito, but Babo. Don Benito is not only telling the story; he's a character in it.
Quote #6
"For they this tight the Rock of vile Reproach,
A dangerous and dreadful place,
To which nor fish nor fowl did once approach." (5.31)
There are lots of quotations from Spenser's The Fairie Queene in "The Encantadas." They emphasize the fact that the Galapagos are strange, distant, and separate from every day experience, just like fairyland. At the same time, though, Spenser's rich fairy world is meant to contrast with the bleak, distant, blighted Galapagos.
Quote #7
A Pisgah View From the Rock (5.55)
Mount Pisgah is supposed to be the mountain Moses climbed to see the Promised Land. So this is an ironic or cutesy reference. You climb up to the top of a big rock in the Galapagos, and you don't see a land flowing with milk and honey, but a lot of barren rocks and a few tortoises.
Quote #8
"The island's mine by Sycorax my mother," said Oberlus to himself…. (5.181)
This is a reference to Shakespeare's The Tempest; the evil Caliban, who lived on the island, was the child of the witch Sycorax. So this is a complicated way of saying that Oberlus is a monster and a meany. He could have just said, "Oberlus is a monster and a meany," but Melville lives for the Shakespeare reference.
Quote #9
And though it may seem very strange to talk of post-offices in this barren region, yet post-offices are occasionally to be found there. They consist of a stake and a bottle. The letters being not only sealed, but corked… Frequently, however, long months and months, whole years glide by and no applicant appears. The stake rots and falls, presenting no very exhilarating object. (5.215)
This is another kind of dead letter office; little messages in bottles left throughout the Galapagos. Humans are trying to make the Galapagos theirs in part by writing on them. This is what Melville's doing too; he's writing on the Galapagos in this very story. His story lasted longer than those bottles with the sticks rotting away. That's why he's a great writer rather than some exiled pirate dude.
Quote #10
So the bell's main weakness was where man's blood had flawed it. And so pride went before the fall. (6.91)
Melville ends "The Bell Tower" with a proverb…or a cliché, if you're less charitable. Ending with a familiar moral like this makes "The Bell Tower" seem like a fable. It's not something that really happened, but an improving story, put together with maybe a little flaw at the end, like the flaw in the bell.