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Here's your shmoop du jour, brought to you by Grocery Stores. Where monsters shop for food.

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How should this sentence be changed so that it is grammatically correct?

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Julio went to the store for some groceries, milk, bread, coffee and cheese.

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Okay, so we've got a nice list of items here, without an Oxford comma.

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But wait, check it out.

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"Groceries" describes the rest of the items in the sentence. It shouldn't just be thrown

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in there with each of the specific items Julio is buying.

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When we're listing items that fit in a category, we often like to use our little buddy, the

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colon. So C and D look promising. They're the only

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options that use one.

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Here's where this one gets tricky. After we bring a colon into the mix, the oxford comma

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isn't really optional anymore.

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The final item of a list needs to be preceded by both a comma and an apostrophe, and C is

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the only one with the comma before the last item.

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Nice work. You win an apos-trophy.

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