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Texas EOC English 1: 1.3 Revision
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Thank you We sneak in and here's your smoke du

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jour brought to you by jobs in prison or so

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it came hammered into a licence plate check Falling passage

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joining us tricking americans make a film with welcoming initially

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with french americans in law making public many criminal law

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Is that side my horny All right well sentence seven

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should be moved where alright three choices Well the main

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purpose is sentenced seven is to tell us that disenfranchisement

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happens when a person or a population loses the rights

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of vote but the main problem with the current placement

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of the sentences that it takes way too long to

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define the word So where should we put sentence seven

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Well option a doesn't make problem any better even if

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we shove in sentence seven year sentence six it's still

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too late we need disenfranchisement defined and we need it

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stat since we know option a is wrong we're sure

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that option is even worse It just doesn't make sense

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to use a big word a bunch of times before

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we tell our readers what it means Of course we're

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just trying to impress them with our amazing vocabulary that

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we don't do that around here Answer d takes it

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too far Paragraphs hasn't gotten to the holiest enfranchisement thing

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by the time sentence three rolls around So putting the

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definition this early in the paragraph would be too much

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information to soon reminds us of a couple of dates

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We've been on a separate issue Option c is the

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correct answer starts using the word disenfranchisement Incense Five So

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it makes sense to define the word directly beforehand to

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find it too late We're already confused You find it

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too soon and it's like well when a date dishes

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all the intimate details of their last relationship before you've 00:01:54.13 --> [endTime] even ordered the appetizers check please

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