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CAHSEE ELA Writing: Punctuation. Drill 5, Problem 3. How should this sentence be corrected, if at all?
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Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to buy
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really art because imaginary art is well just too abstract
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reading were skimming We're tired of skimming but we're doing
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it anyway because we're supposed to skim skim skin like
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number spam spam spam money Pipe him skin What is
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the best way to rewrite sentence For and here the
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potential answers A real art All caps that classical paintings
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All right well release uses sarcasm when describing classical representational
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art as really art missed it the first time though
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Yeah we did too The trouble with the original sentences
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that this sarcasm is well just not totally clear Unlike
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our fine working schmuck where it hits over the head
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with a hammer The main idea of this paper is
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that abstract art is just a cz legit as representational
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art at least things that a smear of paint on
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a canvas is as good as a painting that's painstakingly
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realistic this versus that If that's the case we've got
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some napkins left over from lunch that we'd love for
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her to take a look at for eight thousand dollars
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each All right let's get started by mixing choice Hey
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this not only has the same problem is the original
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sense but it also makes things worse by being convoluted
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and hard to understand at least would probably pull her
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hair out if you saw option d This sentence says
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that on li classical art is really art which is
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the total opposite of what lisa's trying to say Our
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author wouldn't be too happy with choice be either her
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Point is that most people think that classical painting is
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the only kind of art that's real But this sense
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is trying to convince us otherwise Well guess what choice
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see is the correct answer It keeps the meaning of
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the original sentence but manages to give us the correct
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kind of emphasis on the term riel art Putting the
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phrase real art in quotation marks shows sarcasm allowing at
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least to get across the idea that she doesn't agree
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with what most people think Way should be good as
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long as we don't go too crazy with quotation marks
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they was their significance If we'll use too often and
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here's looking at you fans of air quotes rather tears 00:02:13.558 --> [endTime] or something you know
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