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Thank you And here's your shmoop du jour Brought to

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you by lists grocery list birthday list Shmoop dooz Your

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lists are checking the following Just skimming skimming I don't

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need a polka You water help ality All right we're

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done Yeah because we say so All right What change

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needs to be made to sentence eighteen and hear the

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pencil answers blah blah All right well let's get gone

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All of these answer choices are sort of on the

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right track Well except he who again is just really

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opposed to change Let's Just go ahead and take that

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one out of the running So as we were saying

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these answer choices are all on the right track Why

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Because they all deal with commas There's a common issue

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in this sentence We just need to find out what

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it is So let's review because abstract artists don't always

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focus on the subject The way that they use line

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tax year and color are extremely important awful but we

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can begin by getting rid of option a sentence eighteen

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starts with the opening phrase because abstract artist don't always

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focus on the subject Well this phrase like most opening

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phrase is needs to be followed by a comma come

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on people Otherwise it'll blend into the rest of the

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sense and chaos will reign Supreme shouldn't follow sees advice

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either The noun texture is part of a list line

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texture and color To keep our sentences coherent we always

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need to separate items on the list with comments This

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idea of course is what leads us to our correct

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answer Option b since line is part of the same

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list as texture It also should be followed by a

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comma though if you ask us being followed by a

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commons a little creepy maybe time for a restraining order 00:01:48.279 --> [endTime] theo

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