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Which of the following supporting details would not elaborate on sentence 15?


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Okay sy writing shmoop furs last in this siri's let's

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Just get down to it in context Which of the

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following supporting details would not elaborate on sense Fifteen so

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fifteen it's like way down here top since in the

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last paragraph Yeah right there While we cannot always change

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or eliminate the things that trigger stress in our lives

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we could make a conscious effort to change our behaviors

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in response to them Okay interesting Well let's think here

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and we're skimming and we're skimming what looks good to

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us Well think about it One of these things is

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not like the other Get rid of the option that

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doesn't offer any concrete support right Not only is avoiding

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stressful situations vague but also is impossible for someone to

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avoid all stressful situations or change every circumstance So it's

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Not stressful So the answer's got to be the right

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there We can avoid stressful situations or change the circumstances

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that induce or cause stress Yeah it's how we know

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that the conclusion of this essay is a little flimsy

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right By adding some details it can be more informative

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in descriptive putting limits on or refusing new responsibilities definitely

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Helped to change the triggers of stress Right Seeing a

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there Get rid of that as we're taking care of

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our bodies be sure of that They also like our

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quiet time in visits with friends so this would get

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added to the paragraph as well So fancy and that's

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it it's d and we're done with this action Lu 00:01:24.825 --> [endTime] of the who yeah there were shmoop

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