ShmoopTube

Where Monty Python meets your 10th grade teacher.

Search Thousands of Shmoop Videos


Texas EOC Level II Videos 81 videos

Texas EOC English 2: 4.2 Understanding and Analysis of Literary Texts
660 Views

Want to pull an Oliver Twist and ask us for more? We've gotcha covered. Click on this link for more Texas EOC goodness. Porridge not included. 

See All

Texas EOC English 2: 4.4 Revision 165 Views


Share It!


Description:

Language:
English Language

Transcript

00:00

Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop du

00:05

jour brought to you by applying to colleges Wouldn't it

00:08

be so much easier if they just use the sorting

00:11

hat Yeah remember that thing from harry potter Alright check

00:14

the following passage and i think fans a slithering around

00:18

here a griffin door whatever they want Evil Good good

00:24

Evil knows All right maria would like to revise sense

00:28

eleven Right there That sense Eleven to create a smoother

00:31

transition from the second to the third paragraphs Which of

00:34

the following is the best revision and hear the pinch

00:37

lancers All right i see myself after believing pirate Well

00:43

you certainly has the narcissism of doctors Okay here we

00:47

go So what we need here is a sense that

00:49

transitions are smoothly from the info on maria's future residency

00:54

to the paragraph about maria's post residency career plans How

00:58

hard could that be Well it's not so easy for

01:00

option A chain myself working in a clinic first again

01:03

experience and then started my own private practice It's our

01:06

dick cheney impression there woody All right well this one

01:10

jumps right into the post residency stuff without any mention

01:13

of the residency way too eager to leave the past

01:16

behind much like maria will probably be when she leaves

01:19

home for college Yeah we've been their choice D doesn't

01:23

mention the residency Either you work in a clinic First

01:26

would be the best way for me to gain strains

01:27

have residency and then it will start My own private

01:29

practice Come on Choices Didn't the last paragraph mean anything

01:33

to you All right Hey look a choice See Right

01:35

here Plan I finished my residency I would want to

01:37

start my own bar private buffer zone wearing clinic experience

01:40

Well it actually manages to mention the residency so we're

01:43

good on that front We get in trouble though is

01:45

the sentence goes along Check out how the order of

01:48

events is a chronological jumble like that The sentence will

01:52

be a lot clearer if maria talks about the clinic

01:55

first and then the private practice Well choice b shows

01:59

the rest How it's After completing my residency i see

02:02

myself working in a clinic to get experience and and

02:04

started my own private practice There we go It begins

02:06

with a clear link to the residency info and gives

02:09

us the rest of maria's plans in the order that

02:11

they occur Got it alright as long as maria doesn't

02:14

ditch med school to be a circus clown or something 00:02:17.34 --> [endTime] else she's in good shape

Related Videos

Texas EOC English 2: 4.2 Understanding and Analysis of Literary Texts
660 Views

Want to pull an Oliver Twist and ask us for more? We've gotcha covered. Click on this link for more Texas EOC goodness. Porridge not included.